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by Shutsumon
17 Nov 2009, 17:49
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Collisions of Steel P.2 - Getting Involved
Replies: 15
Views: 1391

Re: Collisions of Steel P.2 - Getting Involved

Hmmm...

"'All children with purple eyes are to be killed on sight',"

All children ... not all people. So either this is aimed at specifically at Alys, at Minxia children but not adults or I'm missing something...
by Shutsumon
03 Sep 2009, 17:27
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Heaven Sent Hero - Demo Chapter
Replies: 9
Views: 1488

Re: Heaven Sent Hero - Demo Chapter

Not really. I don't go to many forums at the moment.

I'm half tempted to make one here http://www.phpbb3now.com/ just so I can make a private forum for you to post in *laughter* :-D

Another possibility is a friends only or filtered livejournal (or similar)
by Shutsumon
03 Sep 2009, 03:48
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Heaven Sent Hero - Demo Chapter
Replies: 9
Views: 1488

Re: Heaven Sent Hero - Demo Chapter

If you find another private forum to post it on tell us. I'm sure quite a few of us would join. :-D
by Shutsumon
02 Sep 2009, 13:33
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Forum Update [WHIRLWIND NOVEL, PLEASE READ]
Replies: 5
Views: 1172

Re: Forum Update [WHIRLWIND NOVEL, PLEASE READ]

And what about people who posted in here but who no longer frequent the board and don't know this is happening? They posted in a closed forum in good faith. If you then make their works public - effectively publishing them - without their consent it could cause problems down down the line. Just sayi...
by Shutsumon
02 Sep 2009, 13:23
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Forum Update [WHIRLWIND NOVEL, PLEASE READ]
Replies: 5
Views: 1172

Re: Forum Update [WHIRLWIND NOVEL, PLEASE READ]

Kailan wrote:
so, regarding aforementioned original and nano works - if you still want to post in the novel-length or primary writing forum, you are always welcome to do so. :)


Is this forum being made public?

Becky
by Shutsumon
22 Aug 2009, 14:02
Forum: SAGACIOUS WRITING OF INTENT
Topic: NaNoWriMo/Original Fiction?
Replies: 11
Views: 1553

Re: NaNoWriMo/Original Fiction?

Kalga wrote:
I'd probably want to do it, and then lose motivation or idea or something. ;_;


'tis better to have tried and failed than never to have tried at all. :razz: ;-)
by Shutsumon
22 Aug 2009, 04:32
Forum: SAGACIOUS WRITING OF INTENT
Topic: NaNoWriMo/Original Fiction?
Replies: 11
Views: 1553

Re: NaNoWriMo/Original Fiction?

I probably would as well. Though possibly not during NaNo itself - my nano drafts don't even count as a first draft.
by Shutsumon
16 Aug 2009, 11:35
Forum: HARMONIOUS ARTWORK MEDITATION
Topic: Mel's ATCs (artist trading cards)
Replies: 136
Views: 12807

Re: CZ's ATCs (artist trading cards)

*Puts the bog rolls she's been pelted with in the cupboard*

That'll save me some money. :lol:
by Shutsumon
16 Aug 2009, 08:02
Forum: HARMONIOUS ARTWORK MEDITATION
Topic: Mel's ATCs (artist trading cards)
Replies: 136
Views: 12807

Re: CZ's ATCs (artist trading cards)

To understand the term "bog-standard" you have to understand that "bog" is slang for toilet in Britain. Therefore while it is true that bog-standard means roughly the same as standard there is a negativity to it. It means cliche, mundane, generic, unspecial. It has a shade of mea...
by Shutsumon
15 Aug 2009, 11:19
Forum: HARMONIOUS ARTWORK MEDITATION
Topic: Future Picture distribution
Replies: 20
Views: 2374

Re: Future Picture distribution

My immediate response to Valgaav's statement was also "that was uncalled for" and yes, I'm in the UK too.
by Shutsumon
11 Aug 2009, 16:47
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword Epilogue - Shades of the Ending
Replies: 28
Views: 4893

Re: Righteous Sword Epilogue - Shades of the Ending

Eeep! I hope someone realises what her mother did to her and casts necromantic countermagic on Navia before she dies.

Other than that - it's all good.

Becky
by Shutsumon
31 Jul 2009, 03:05
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.65 - The Price Paid
Replies: 21
Views: 3170

Re: Righteous Sword P.65 - The Price Paid

Kestrel having to have a guard in Heaven makes a great deal of sense. A lot of them will be gunning for Kestrel as a way of getting at Chen. Never mind that killing Kestrel would probably be the fastest way to turn Chen evil again. Which would be bad. I'm not surprised that people aren't quite sure ...
by Shutsumon
30 Jul 2009, 00:36
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.64 - Oricalcum Apocalypse
Replies: 32
Views: 4969

Re: Righteous Sword P.64 - Oricalcum Apocalypse

Oh and back in part 62 when I noted that it was hard to seperate Malfeas's thoughts from Chen's? I was wondering at the time if it was at least at much Malfeas who was asking if they'd ever stop loving the UCS as much as Chen. And lo I was right.
by Shutsumon
30 Jul 2009, 00:20
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.64 - Oricalcum Apocalypse
Replies: 32
Views: 4969

Re: Righteous Sword P.64 - Oricalcum Apocalypse

Also Chen may be barred from Creation but she's not barred from the Underworld as far as I can tell. Why do I think she may end up at least partially addressing her crimes by doing some serious damage to the forces of the Void from the rear at some point when they are engaged with Creation. I mean ...
by Shutsumon
29 Jul 2009, 22:20
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.64 - Oricalcum Apocalypse
Replies: 32
Views: 4969

Re: Righteous Sword P.64 - Oricalcum Apocalypse

I need to add - I think the Mask of Winters is probably in very deep doodah with his bosses. His plan has gone wrong on so many levels it's not funny (except it is). Also Chen may be barred from Creation but she's not barred from the Underworld as far as I can tell. Why do I think she may end up at ...
by Shutsumon
29 Jul 2009, 21:28
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.64 - Oricalcum Apocalypse
Replies: 32
Views: 4969

Re: Righteous Sword P.64 - Oricalcum Apocalypse

Well that went well.

So the Games have to remain in play or bad things happen.

Very interesting... so that's the Yozi problem dealt with. Now there's just the Neverborn to deal with.

And I wonder what's going to happen with the Infernal Exalted now.
by Shutsumon
25 Jul 2009, 11:43
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.62 - Finale Infernus
Replies: 18
Views: 3042

Re: Righteous Sword P.62 - Finale Infernus

Which means that absolutely everything that's gone wrong can in the end be laid firmly at the doors of the Primordials once you follow the domino effect back to source. I'm pretty sure that blame-shifting stops being even remotely credible long before the point where you start pointing fingers at t...
by Shutsumon
24 Jul 2009, 16:22
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.62 - Finale Infernus
Replies: 18
Views: 3042

Re: Righteous Sword P.62 - Finale Infernus

Wow, Chen's really messed up at the moment. It's quite hard to tell which parts of what she's saying is her and what is Malfeas. But never mind that - I was going to say I didn't know what Kestrel thought she was doing, but them I realised I knew exactly what she's doing. Her choice between the Sun'...
by Shutsumon
22 Jul 2009, 15:22
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.59 - The Moral Event Horizon
Replies: 26
Views: 4072

Re: Righteous Sword P.59 - The Moral Event Horizon

Zweihander wrote:
goselam wrote:
and oh God, Hal is the man without fear, Chen is a woman who can't feel fear, I need to stop thinking about this before I start assigning the characters to different color Corps and trying to draw pictures of them in the uniforms


No, no. Keep going. :D


I second this sentiment.
by Shutsumon
21 Jul 2009, 10:59
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.60 - No Solace for Silver
Replies: 30
Views: 4472

Re: Righteous Sword P.60 - No Solace for Silver

It was the Minxia contagion - it usually passes by bite but I imagine that grabbing the essence pattern of a minxia (any minxia) could do it as it's a supernatural contagion. It's been set up for a long time. I'm not sure about point 3 but it seems plausible - exalts are immune but this would be be...
by Shutsumon
21 Jul 2009, 10:38
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.60 - No Solace for Silver
Replies: 30
Views: 4472

Re: Righteous Sword P.60 - No Solace for Silver

It was the Minxia contagion - it usually passes by bite but I imagine that grabbing the essence pattern of a minxia (any minxia) could do it as it's a supernatural contagion. It's been set up for a long time. I'm not sure about point 3 but it seems plausible - exalts are immune but this would be be...
by Shutsumon
21 Jul 2009, 10:03
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.60 - No Solace for Silver
Replies: 30
Views: 4472

Re: Righteous Sword P.60 - No Solace for Silver

Killing Mechanic through some sort of bizarre hellish infection thing that hasn't even been hinted at in the time I've followed this story, and which seems to have no purpose except for arbitrarily killing a character that was going to survive: Bad writing. (Now, I do concede that it might have bee...
by Shutsumon
21 Jul 2009, 03:59
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Age of Blood and Bone, Part 60: Rock Falls, Everybody Dies
Replies: 3
Views: 1188

Re: Age of Blood and Bone, Part 60: Rock Falls, Everybody Dies

I do wonder though - is that was the Silver Prince told Mnemon she needed to do right then? Does he want Serafin there for a reason?
by Shutsumon
17 Jun 2009, 16:41
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.57 - Finding a Soul
Replies: 22
Views: 2958

Re: Righteous Sword P.57 - Finding a Soul

I'm not minding that Nathaniel survived. I'm not even minding how he came to survive. I do think there needs to be a bit more foreshadowing. I mean Jue's shard has Gaia's Fetich sitting inside it. Hence it has a bond to Gaia. And it has a solar bond to Nathaniel's shard. It's hardly a stretch to ima...
by Shutsumon
11 Jun 2009, 16:28
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Righteous Sword P.56 - Saving a Soul
Replies: 17
Views: 2512

Re: Righteous Sword P.56 - Saving a Soul

Well done, Nate! It's always nice to see a character who started out as less than nice make good decisions. This is why you deserved your exhaltation in the first place. And you got to go out in a blaze of glory. I was going to say 'unless of course you had a perfect dodge' but you used all your ess...
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