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by Delamerik
06 Nov 2007, 06:10
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Going of Both - Part 4
Replies: 3
Views: 696

Re: The Going of Both - Part 4

Yellow jade is the result of alchemy gone wrong, as the books present it, but it still has its uses like any jade.
by Delamerik
05 Nov 2007, 15:10
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Going of Both - Part 4
Replies: 3
Views: 696

The Going of Both - Part 4

Gods he hoped the sparks did not set fire to the trees. His entire side was torn open and emitting unpleasant, unsettling sounds and occasional flashes of sparks as metal scraped metal and wires let fly their transported essence in bursts of sparks and jolts of electricity. Yet he could not stop. He...
by Delamerik
29 Oct 2007, 20:42
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Going of Both - Part 3
Replies: 3
Views: 633

Re: The Going of Both - Part 3

... New? :D
by Delamerik
22 Oct 2007, 13:30
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Going of Both - Part 3
Replies: 3
Views: 633

The Going of Both - Part 3

“So, are you sure we can trust her?” “We did before, didn’t we?” “Well yeah, and she nearly died.” “She lived to tell the tale. Now she’s older, and knows how to handle a fight. Arasak will be with her regardless, so I see no cause to worry.” “Alright then, your call in the end...
by Delamerik
10 Oct 2007, 12:07
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Going of Both - Part 2
Replies: 2
Views: 540

The Going of Both - Part 2

Here's hoping -some- things make sense now. But of course, they won't all until I write prequelly-stuff. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - If it weren’t for her lips… reflected a cer...
by Delamerik
10 Oct 2007, 12:02
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Going of Both - Part 1
Replies: 2
Views: 556

Re: The Going of Both - Part 1

Well, the matter of the intruder won't be explained in -this- serial, so I'll explain here. He was looking for this Manse that he was killed in, after someone else on the same 'side' as he heard something he shouldn't have, and related the message. This side, to be specific, is that of Walker in Dar...
by Delamerik
08 Oct 2007, 11:55
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Derelict, Part 1 (Scary Story Month)
Replies: 4
Views: 949

Re: Derelict, Part 1 (Scary Story Month)

So very, very screwed...

I like the concept, and find this very intriguing, and therefore requisition more. Rawr.
by Delamerik
05 Oct 2007, 22:08
Forum: SAGACIOUS WRITING OF INTENT
Topic: can't say what's going on (ghostly gossip, bad implications)
Replies: 2
Views: 1051

Re: can't say what's going on (ghostly gossip, bad implications)

Interesting (and rather amusing). I especially like how it believably came across as serious, even after the stated comical inspiration. Also...

Heavens Gardner wrote:
clutching a plush frog toy to his too-thin chest.

I -wonder- if the plushie's important. :P
by Delamerik
05 Oct 2007, 12:10
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Luminescent Tranquility: Chapter 1: Rhalos (Part 1) [L&V]
Replies: 7
Views: 994

Re: Luminescent Tranquility: Chapter 1: Rhalos (Part 1) [L&V]

Hit 'im with the smashfist! Or... mechanical arm! Or... whatever it is!

... Uh, yeah. I like it. I hope to see more.
by Delamerik
05 Oct 2007, 08:05
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Flight of Glorious Dove, Part 4, The Eruption [Violence]
Replies: 5
Views: 962

Re: The Flight of Glorious Dove, Part 4, The Eruption [Violence]

Interesting li'l bit, and from what I hear, very indicative of her talents. I do hope to see s'more.

Though I do note that at one point, the apostrophe in girl's was misplaced and put on the end, as if pluralized. Still, all in all, it's great!
by Delamerik
04 Oct 2007, 17:38
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Going of Both - Part 1
Replies: 2
Views: 556

The Going of Both - Part 1

Yay, I's back! Again. I hope for a while this time. Didn't work out too well last time. Well, this time I make no promises and won't even try to give a hope; it could well turn out false again. But the fact is, Sun-lit Night I've lost inspiration for, and so I'm gonna try some other stuff. If you've...
by Delamerik
19 Jun 2007, 12:18
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Sun-lit Night pt. 18
Replies: 5
Views: 1145

Re: Sun-lit Night pt. 18

Great to be back. Thanks.

I'm thinking I'll actually have a schedule this time around, posting on saturdays or something. I'd say mondays, but I'm busy this upcoming one and missing the first day of a new schedule can't be good luck.
by Delamerik
18 Jun 2007, 17:13
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Sun-lit Night pt. 18
Replies: 5
Views: 1145

Sun-lit Night pt. 18

Hot. Friggin'. Damn. I quite honestly forgot about this series while I was spending a long while quite distant from TFS. Well, for those who still might vaguely care, here's a gift to celebrate my return. Apologies for the no-doubt rusty writing. =--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=--=-...
by Delamerik
16 Mar 2007, 15:22
Forum: HARMONIOUS ARTWORK MEDITATION
Topic: Aiden Comic #238 *warning: the big guns*
Replies: 5
Views: 1351

Holy damn indeed! How will he win this one?
by Delamerik
15 Mar 2007, 01:18
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Pivot Child - Part 2 (Really rich Sidereals. And plot.)
Replies: 25
Views: 4208

Strangely enough...Jad would get in Yezengen's way too. He'd certainly try to talk her out of wanting to rule Creation, at least. Wouldn't draw a sword on her though, just resist her and her plans. Jad thinks all the Exalts have completely blown their right to rule (the Lunars could possibly make a...
by Delamerik
09 Mar 2007, 14:13
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: 8. In Which Our Heroine Is Sought Out
Replies: 4
Views: 1068

I love Alakazar. He's such an awesome ass.

Why do I see Harreth developing a tic sometime soon?
by Delamerik
09 Mar 2007, 13:10
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Pivot Child - Prologue
Replies: 25
Views: 4603

Pff, stay factionless. It's fun to watch them bicker.

As for the story, I have to say it's lookin' pretty good from the outset.
by Delamerik
05 Mar 2007, 10:45
Forum: HARMONIOUS ARTWORK MEDITATION
Topic: Aiden Comic #230 *warning: worthy foe*
Replies: 27
Views: 3298

PAoC, pop in the forms from SPB and some scythe-style. Boom, we have our Sid here bending Aiden over.
by Delamerik
22 Feb 2007, 20:37
Forum: SAGACIOUS WRITING OF INTENT
Topic: Outside Interference
Replies: 0
Views: 942

Outside Interference

Hay, I'm still writing stuff. <_<;; That Thalunis sure says some strange things. Wait, that hair looks familiar ... Edit: Gah, almost forgot. Bronze-faction member mentioned is product of TFS's very own Shadow_Lynne ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------...
by Delamerik
14 Feb 2007, 18:53
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Locust Crusade P.16 (Negotiations will be short)
Replies: 21
Views: 2871

Short seems a bit of a misnomer. Nonexistant should be a bit closer to the mark.
by Delamerik
13 Feb 2007, 18:15
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Inmaru of the Nine Branches' backstory. (Pt. 1)
Replies: 3
Views: 793

Damn, I like this. There are a few grammar-bits here and there, and the tense-change Kraken mentioned, but still. I like. Keep on going, man.
by Delamerik
13 Feb 2007, 13:53
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: The Dynasty's Shadowed Light, Part 3
Replies: 5
Views: 1257

Heck, add my thumbs in there. Awesome.
by Delamerik
12 Feb 2007, 12:58
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Sun-lit Night pt. 17
Replies: 3
Views: 1045

So, two Solar, an Alchemical, an Abyssal, a Wyld Hunt and two other Abyssal walk into a bar... And suddenly there's one less wall and a small crater in the floor. Sometimes, I wonder what the attraction to all those not-as-epic games is. But yes, thanks for the positive comments. I'll try to fix th...
by Delamerik
10 Feb 2007, 22:54
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: Sun-lit Night pt. 17
Replies: 3
Views: 1045

Sun-lit Night pt. 17

Hey, I still write? Who'da thunk it!? Stupid useless headacheyness making me nonfunctional for a while. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Given the situation, Tepet Piribo thought that his confusion was warranted. Some strange fellow in funerar...
by Delamerik
05 Feb 2007, 16:57
Forum: WHIRLWIND NOVEL METHOD
Topic: 4. In Which Our Heroine Receives A Pet
Replies: 3
Views: 1079

As much as I'm pretty sure his intentions are less than noble... I like this Raksha. A lot.
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