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Acts of Dinosaur

04 Feb 2007, 17:37

Shun: A young savant-in-training from the Hundred Kingdoms takes the Second Breath as a Lunar and becomes embroiled in the push and pull of Creation. Still ongoing; an extensive rewrite is also imminent.
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
Part 10
Part 11
Part 12
Part 13
Part 14
Part 15
Part 16
Part 17
Part 18
Part 19
Part 20
Part 21
Part 22
Part 23: Unstable Ceilings, Crumbling Down
Part 24: There Will Be Retcons
Part 25: Universal Upheaval
Part 26: An Honestly Complex Situation
Part 27: Out of Order Organics
Part 28: High Tension Test

Shun Rewrite: Creator's remorse was getting me down, so I decided to take a strike back. Eventually, this will cut off and head back into the story already established. (I lied - It completely replaces the above)

Part 1: Something Amiss With The Lad
Part 2: From One Anathema to Another...
Part 3: Ill Winds of the Gathering Storm
Part 4: Weathering the Tempest
Part 5: Aftermath of the Split Threads
Part 6: Nature Abhors an Event Vacuum
Part 7: Back to War
Part 8: Pieces to Disturbing Puzzles
Part 9: Bloody, Tiring Path to a Moment's Rest
Part 10: A Bit Harsh
Part 11: A Near-Thankless Task
Part 12: Making the Acquaintance of Agony
Part 13: Blood-Soaked Intercession
Part 14: A Sacrifice Cheapened
Part 15: Farewells and Greetings
Part 16: Stories Carved on a Full Moon
Part 17: Big Damn Demigods
Part 18: Unwanted Righteousness
Part 19: Trouble With Ourselves
Part 20: Transcendent Hero Backstabbing Meditation
Part 21: If At First You Don't Succeed Heroically...
Part 22: Ruined Dreams
Part 23: Appropos Chapter Number, No?
Part 24: Resonant Disobediences
Part 25: A Heartbreaking Send-Off
Part 26: Dance of the Living Tower I
Part 27: Dance of the Living Tower II
Part 28: Revelatory Confirmations
Part 29: The Promised Companion
Part 30: Madness Unearthed
Part 31: Confinement
Part 32: Strangers Around Here
Part 33: Fallout
Part 34: Heart Troubles
Part 35: We Do Not Speak Of It (I)
Part 36: We Do Not Speak Of It (II)
Part 37: Apocalyptic Preparation Council
Part 38: Accepting Creation's Rejection
Part 39: Isn't It Sad, Sprout-chan?
Part 40: Dreadful Reunion
Part 41: The Last Fig Leaf (content warning: fades to black)
Part 42: Not Without Consequence
Part 43: Shadow Liberator
Part 44: Retrieval
Part 45: Witnesses to Darkness
Part 46: Unlimited Metaphor Works

Agony - a one-shot about a Slayer's Exaltation. In a torture pit where a blood ape's scent doesn't stand out, the evil of the Demon City can pale in comparison to what humans can inflict.
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Re: Acts of Dinosaur

31 Oct 2007, 23:40

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Re: Acts of Dinosaur

27 Aug 2008, 13:03

Bump for completed Haunted Moonrise.
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Re: Acts of Dinosaur

16 Jan 2009, 20:08

The Further Past: Context and prelude for Shun and Haunted Moonrise (and any other "divergence point" story that I might happen to post as companions to them. Lots of influence from the visual novel way of doing things, there).
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Re: Acts of Dinosaur

15 Feb 2009, 19:04

Started posting a rather extensive rewrite of the first part of the first story.
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Re: Acts of Dinosaur

22 Nov 2009, 10:33

40 chapters of rewrite thus far. Hopefully, that group of four tens isn't quite so terrible.
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Re: Acts of Dinosaur

28 Nov 2009, 07:43

Agony added.
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Re: Acts of Dinosaur

09 Jan 2010, 09:50

Another five chapters of the Rewrite, so bump.
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