Hello all,
I've been lurking here for years (literally) now soaking up people's fiction and art so I thought I'd give something back.
What follows is a write up of a campaign that I never ran. I like thinking about stories and characters but I've never been very good at getting them down on paper nor at being organised enough to actually GM something, so instead I chose to write up this campaign idea as fiction. The flavour, I guess, is Exalted cum Harry Potter cum Battle Royale with a dash of Gunnerkrigg Court and Psychonauts (from which I pinched the name).
If you do take the time to read this, thank you! I'm interested to hear people's opinions on any part of what I've written as I'm hoping to improve my writing as I go (even re-reading the first few lines I put down a week or so ago I feel the need to go back and change them, but will resist for now) and your opinions will help me do that. Also, thanks to everyone who posted in Kalian's "Tools for Writers" thread, I found a lot of the advice in there to be very useful.
Please bear with this story, it may be a bit of a slow burn but I hope it pays off in the end. I have the first few chapters ready to post now and will post more as and when I write it.
(Mods, if you want to move this to Sagacious Writing of Intent feel free, I placed it here due to length)